NewU Pt. 37

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The sound of another car engine echoed into the room, yanking me back to the moment, getting closer by the second. There was no gunfire heralding its arrival as it had done for us; there were no mighty explosions of landmines or rockets, just the deep bass rumble of an engine getting closer. Finally, it pulled to a stop outside. My ears tracked the doors opening and the sounds of what sounded like three men alighting from it

"He's here," one of the Inquisitors said, his voice coming from a spot that would have looked over the wall and out onto the street.

"Get him on his feet," another voice said. A few seconds later, two men hooked their hands under my armpits and hoisted me upright. I may have gone a little overboard with the blood from that gash above my eye because it had flowed down the entire side of my face, blurring my vision as I tried to blink it clear. I spat out a mouth full of dust and was turned to face the archway, listening as three sets of feet made their way up the stairs. I made a point of not looking at the pile of rubble. Olena was hiding in there with my radio, and I didn't want to draw any attention to it.

A blurred outline of a man appeared in the doorway, standing there for a moment and just looking at me.

My vision was thick from the blood that had run down into my eyes, and blinking didn't seem to be clearing it as fast as I would have liked. That blood had been caked in the dust and the soot from the concrete floor, too.

His thick, rich, Italian accent identified him with the very first syllable. "Hello, Pete."

In an instant, that shadow of corruption shattered into nothingness. Every doubt, every question, and every manipulation vanished as the infection dissipated.

Time froze. My mind smashed against itself as a thousand thoughts all competed for primacy at the same time. I remembered the way the ghosts in my city stopped to look at him as I showed him around, the suspicion and the unease on their faces as if they could sense the corruption being left in his wake. That wind. Memories, some mine, some belonging to Uri, of excuses made to keep my training - and the training of others - at its lowest possible level. Charlotte's almost instinctive hatred of the man.

But mostly, I felt that pit of betrayal in my stomach. Uri had once considered him to be one of his closest friends, his most steadfast ally, his confidant... a brother in arms. Yet the attack on the party had raised too many questions. The memory of the moment that Uri's own corruption was shattered flashed through my mind, the moment in the diner with me when he realized that the only person who could be responsible for that level of treachery was his friend.

I remembered that look of horror washing over his face.

His attempts to keep me away from him, to protect me, to protect this mission, even if it meant putting himself in harm's way. Waking up one morning to find him gone from their camp and knowing... knowing... that he was on his way here to silence Olena.

Knowing it was a trap, but knowing he had to come anyway.

Even if it meant his death.

I sighed deeply, letting my face finally express my utter loathing of the man in front of me before it hung toward the ground.

"... Marco..."

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

It was so obvious several chapters ago it was Marco. I kept wondering where this was going and why Pete couldn't see the possibility. The idea of him being corrupted never crossed my mind, and obviously didn't cross his either. Well played and planned. His rush to see Pete after his awakening and them never following up now makes perfect sense. You have planned out this story and the plot very well.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Very goo very good! Please keep em coming good sir!

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

So glad you are back. I was beginning to worry.

rockingtilidroprockingtilidrop2 months ago

Sooooo obvious it was his bogus mentor. Hopefully next chapter soon

mharrisonmharrison2 months ago

Excelent stufrf again. Loving this series. Keep up the great work :

Not a huge suprise who it was.... but still really enjoying the whole story line and the detail you manage to build into it all.

Many thanks for sharing with us all.

bear1999bear19992 months ago

Just keep it coming...I like the background and don't find it tedious at all..Marco wasn't too big a surprise but is there still a man behind the curtain. 5/5

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Another great chapter. It was time for Pete to evolve again, because he wasn't going to get anywhere the way he was. It was just going to turn him into an inhuman monster. It felt like he was wandering aimlessly because he was, deliberately. Now the next phase starts.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

You have a compelling writing technique that you use to extensive. Why did they have to go to Ukraine to find a resolution?

1Sam20231Sam20232 months ago

Nail biter cliffhanger! Again!

Well done... speed up pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Really liking this story

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

One of the best stories on this site for sure. I am eagerly awaiting more of this great storyline and must say what a good job you are doing. It seems that my patience is rewarded every time a new chapter is posted. This world you’ve imagined with it’s magical interior mental cityscapes is one I will truly miss when your story finally must conclude. 5/5 stars sir!

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