All Comments on 'NewU Pt. 38'

Epic and brilliant, let the havoc begin!

Brilliant, a long build up and now we have to wait. But what a final paragraph. 5⛤

Amazing stuff - really good chapter.

Can't wait to read how this fight goes :)

Excellent chapter.

Cry Havoc and release the Dogs of War.

Can't wait to read more

Absolutely love it!!! Great storyline. I can’t wait for the next chapter! Please hurry with it!!!

Brilliant!!!

The only thing missing is the ten stars rating button: in other words excellent

Absolutely outstanding!!

What Ducatasti said. Brilliant

You are an amazing storyteller.

I hope to the return of the giant mole wearing goggles in this battle.

Was too short for me. I have been waiting for the end of this fight.

This is one of the very best series. Every day I go and look to see if another chapter has been added.

That was incredibly brilliant on a magnitude that I doubt will be even close to equaled. That last epic scene is one of those moments where you can feel the energy. It’s is the same feeling at a live concert for a favorite group, in a movie theater when the hero goes to take out the enemy and those things always have a crowd of people that seems to be feeding that feeling and yet here I sit all alone and I had that same feeling as being in a place with hundreds to thousands of people all adding to that energy that you managed to draw just from me with the goosebumps and the energetic high and it is totally and completely awesome. I never thought that could happen from reading a story even though I have felt strong emotions that brought me to tears while requiring me to take a break for a few days to regroup before continuing the story and yet this was stronger than even that. I look forward to the future where I reread this unbelievably epic tale that has grown over time to the point that when I look back to the beginnings of this literary journey, there was no inkling that it would grow into what it has currently become which in my mind makes you one damn fine author with seriously impressive skills and talent. Now let’s see some serious destruction and death on scales that have not been scene as of yet!

Frank N. Stein

As per usual . outstanding.

By far this is your best series in the list of your stories this chapter reinforces that in my opinion.

In my selfishness I anxiously await the next installment.

- DK

Brilliant. Swift and Orwell.

Plesse do not take long for the next installment.

Thanks.

Anonymous One

Now that was a brilliant chapter and I can hardly wait for the next one. Thank you so much for the effort you put into your work please keep it up.

Oh and that last scean where uri appears is exactly like the end of marvels endgame with captain america saying the mortal phrase AVENGERS ASSEMBLE.

Wonderful installment of a great story. And once again, you have solidified your place in my mind as my favorite author with the banter between Jeeves and Pete in the last page. That was just hilarious at exactly the right point in the sequence.

Ahhhhhhhhhhh noooooo damn cliffhanger , goddam pesky welsh #*#**

Great as awaya lol so new chapter next week yeah lol ;)

Excellent. Keep 'em coming.

HELLFIRE upon them!!

Shapachan

Great chapter in a great story. And so it has all come to this...

What a fun ride. You have me hooked :-)

More like this, in length lol

I am so hooked! Most people dont even know history, so having no knowledge on the Praetorians takes this deeper! I like the unfolding of history, combined with modern and even magical warfare! Keep it up!

Fantastic, though I think I have picked up on a couple of continuity errors.

1. Marco has been aware of Toussant being a double agent for Pete from the beginning of Toussant's mission, so why has he not informed any Praetorian's of this fact? They operate in cells, but that does not mean that Marco cannot give this simple message to his superiors. Doesn't really make sense to me that Tiberius and others would not have been made aware of this and stopped him getting into the Ukrainian compound.

2. When Pete absorbed Sterling's energy it was stated that because Sterling had been absorbing other Evo's for centuries his well held about 5 times the energy of Uri, as far as I recall. However this chapter seems to state the complete opposite, because absorbing Sterlings power gave Pete an additional power plant, but Uri's gave him four additional power plants, meaning Uri should have given Pete about 4 times the energy that Sterling did.