All Comments on 'Nice Family Vacation Ch. 01'

Wonderful build of sexual tension. More please!

I'm loving this one, please continue!

good story.

Looking forward to part 2

Excellent read. Can’t wait for more!

Brought back great memories of my sister and me. We had a close

relationship when we were younger prior to our later marriages.

Eventually she and her husband along with me and my wife

visited nudist camps together - I had become a nudist during

college. They wanted to try new experiences so we invited

them along - turned out to be fun ..innocent fun times.

They never knew of our early years adventures.

Enjoyable little tale. Seems clear where it’s going, but I’m expecting a few twists. Unusually good use of the French, but very disappointed to find ‘chaise lounge’ in your text. This is a strange US corruption which you find frequently on Lit (though not so much elsewhere strangely). The term, in French because it’s French, is ‘chaise longue’, ‘long-chair’.

Brilliant well written I thought and it has the makings of a good series. One that I will absolutely be following.

I can't wait for part 2.

When can we expect chapter 2?

Great description of a French Beach. It's not models running around topless.

At least we had sand in Deauville.

I cannot wait for part 2! This is a great story

I check this website daily for part 2. please release it soon.

Wen will part 3 come out?

Excellent introduction. The dialogue is superb!

Please update this story

This is great! Please continue!

Are you going to continue this

Excellent,Have been waiting along time for ch.2

It a little slow at first. If a story doesn't grab me right away I don't read it

I love the mutual teasing.

Lovely premise.

Nicely written.

Great buildup for what's likely to be next.

Lovely teasing.

Five stars.

Tantalizing first part...

I want to know more....lots more...