All Comments on 'Nicholas Ichabous & The CVS Girl'

a complete 2 page story with emotions beautifully portrayed !!

Absolutely!!!!! I agree, beautifully written. Keep the stories coming.

Great story, The kind we all like to read, well written....91B2

This was one of the best stories I've ever read! Thank you and keep up the excellent writing.

Thank you for your work. tom anon

Well worth the read. 2nd and 3rd segments are justified.

A simple, sweet story, remarkably well told. I hope they stay together forever; they certainly seem to be made (and even named) for each other.

Wonderful story. Thank you!

Revealing. Sweet. Tender. Warm. More like this, please... Five Stars.

I liked the story, but if you are going to make up a unique and unusual name, at least keep the spelling consistent. Nick's middle name kept switching from Ichabous to Ichabus and back again.

Saddled with names like those, I can just hear both of them going through childhood saying, "You can call me 'Nicky'/'Nikki', just don't call me 'Icky'"

Very enjoyable and entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.