All Comments on 'Nick And His Two Sisters Pt. 01'

Good start. I look forward to more!

Actually perfect family dynamics for this story. Right amount of physical beauty that would attract taboo.feelings from two responsible people who haven't found someone yet.

I have read many stories over many years and yours has the perfect start for more HOT chapters. The stage is set for your to make the next chapter very hot and arousing. There are so many ways you can go in each as Rebecca is now very aroused by her brother and Nick is too from seeing his hot sister's boobs etc. Hopefully, their older sister Jennifer can be gone for a few days and then Nick and Rebecca can explore their bodies and get each other very aroused and more. Please continue and thanks.

This has the promise of an interesting story; I'm looking forward to further chapters.

Definitely looking forward to what you have in store.

Hi since I have read your "horny house" I was waiting for a continuation of that

story but this keeps my interest.do i take it that the horny house no longer interest

u ?

Can't wait to read the next one

Hi guys, thanks for the lovely comments. This story is a long series. I’m thinking at most 12 parts, this is to flesh out the story that I want to tell a little bit more. If this interests you then please stick with it. It will be slow to begin but it gets very very hot the further we go.

In reference to horny house. These were my first stories. They aren’t that great and I am fully focused on this series for now. I’ve found my writing mojo and I’m enjoying it more. I may return to it in the future.

Liked it - 5* Would like to know what's up with parents/mom? Always out of country is messed up as you represent it. I get sets part of the story up, but still would like to know more. Dad and Jennifer communicate, so why isn't he contacting the other two? Are they his?

Lived the experience. W/O going into detail I had an actual incestuous relationship with my sister. And you are describing pretty much how it went. A tentative start that took a long time to develop. But once it started it did not end for years. Keep up the great story.

Would love to see a dusting of dark hair on Nick's muscular chest -- just enough to get rebecca going even more. Maybe a slight treasure trail?

Thanks.

very good so far

I don't know how this story or series received such a high rating with the extremely poor grammar. Please find an editor before you upload any more stories.

Way to build the tension!

Looking forward to more!

Nice build,but a little forced. Rebeccas character was way over the top in her reactions

But still, see how it goes

4/5

It looks like English is not your native language. Poor grammar. Has a forced feel to it. Generally poorly written

I didn't find Rebecca to be very believable. The way you portrayed her was extremely erratic. You should have planned her actions and emotions better. The interactions between your characters needs work. It's the same as Newton's law. For every action there will be a reaction. Better planning will prevent you from coming off as a sophomoric writer. I still gave you a 5, but I hope to see improvement.

This was good, I felt Rebecca's character was somewhat in shock at herself but couldn't help the way she feels. It may have been a small jump there but I think in reality all humans may find themselves doing something out of character such as going to apologize then feeling naughty when in belief the opposite person is naked under a sheet. She may have even noticed if the sheet was a little bit transparent, that sums up the way others don't have an imagination. So yes 5stars. Can't wait to read more, thank you

Great story line...I feel the pace is as good as it can be, bringing Alex and Becca along at just the right pace...

They ALL obviously care about each other/take care of each other...can tell by the interaction...even Jennifer cares, with her birch attitude to hide behind...

5/5 Stars...Yay!!