All Comments on 'Nick And His Two Sisters Pt. 06'

Your story telling is fantastic. Can't wait to read more from you. As for the grammer I think the words just fall into place even if they are not right. It is easy to understand what you was trying to write. Hope Jessica takes an interest in him soon. Maybe she likes kinky things the others haven't done yet if you catch my drift.... 5 stars.

5* - Love this series and the balance of sex and the relationship interactions. I would like the characters to "clarify" their feelings between each other better. It seems Rebecca and Nick may be "in love" with each other but other times not. I struggle seeing Nick intimate both physically and emotionally with her but then be chasing Jessie and occasional fling with Jennifer. Clear where the relationship with his cousin is headed, but at what point are there too many to the point the plot lines become to broad and this devolves into a stroke fest? Not there yet, but it's headed that way...

omg bro that was 100% HOT thanks i hope thay keep cumming

Good series. BUT you really have to get an editor! I thought “treacle of the water” in Pt 5 was bad until you used “it was dark in the Elk” above.

There has to be some moving on with the relationship with Jennifer...AND, Jessica (cousin) has to be interesting in the future!!

Glad to have this series to read, even with the "off" writing style......but, I can still read it...like translating Spanish, when I am reading it!!

**5**Stars...again!!

So. Six inches is basically average. Can we stop going on about how impressive his size is? Because it isn’t.

WTF does "It was dark in the elk " mean? You/somebody needs to read this through, at least once, before you publish! There are way too many obvious mistakes...