All Comments on 'Nick's Gift'

by Black Tulip

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Sexy and fun

too short, though. Must be an elf thing. ;-)

lil_elvislil_elvisover 18 years ago
Sexy fun

Nice, erotic, fun romp. Great read, BT.

Alex De KokAlex De Kokover 18 years ago
Nice work!

I liked the touch of humour running through the story.

Alex

Tom CollinsTom Collinsover 18 years ago
Heh

It was hot, and I got a nice chuckle at the end. Sex/erotica is good when it's fun.

Honey123Honey123over 18 years ago
Sweets

It's always a pleasure reading one of your works...

You did a great job yet again!!

~Honey

Aurora BlackAurora Blackover 18 years ago
Sizzling Hot

BT, your story made me squirm and now I really need a tissue. Best of luck!

ABSTRUSEABSTRUSEover 18 years ago
wonderful

as usual BT! it's always a treat to read something you've written.

Abs.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Fantastic story

and always a pleasure to read your work. Great job. Good luck in the contest.

Colleen ThomasColleen Thomasover 18 years ago
Always a pleasure

To read your work BT.

Unsung MuseUnsung Museover 18 years ago
Nice Work!

A very enjoyable read, BT.

Best of luck in the contest!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
*snicker*

LOVED IT! Great job BT. Your words really brought me into the tale. Naughty Saint Nick...

BRAVA.

windwriterwindwriterover 18 years ago
Very erotic

Somehow your story sheds light on the "typical" buffet style Christmas party in the back room of a restaurant beging rather borish. Perhaps I will suggest your "style" of Christmas party to the HR department for future reference. I am quite sure it would improve attendance. Very erotic, sensual and exciting. Good luck in the contest.

Respectfully,

~wind

Rumple ForeskinRumple Foreskinover 18 years ago
Another quality BT production

A well-crafted read, BT. In other words, just what I've come to expect. Good luck in the contest.

Rumple

impressiveimpressiveover 18 years ago
Good job, BT!

Happy holidays and good luck in the contest! ~Imp

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Tulip you did it again!!!!!!!!

Once again your words painted a beautiful canvas!

Really enjoy your stories............never stop writing and being you! The glenboy2 will always be ready to read and experience more with you!

JRavenJRavenover 18 years ago
Seduced by Santa Claus...

It explains why they didn't live together. Well written. Good luck with the contest.

Jenny

sacksackover 18 years ago
well done...

as are all your stories! I feel privileged to read them!

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
I'd shoot` 'em

ha ha ha ho ho ho I'd shoot 'em if they did that to me hehehe...great erotic story ..<grin> as long as it was some one else <laughing> nice suprise ...Nick's Gift~ (^5) excellent and very well written.

Merry Christmas and Good Luck (~_~)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Good luck...

... in the contest. I enjoyed reading the story.

Always, E

Selena_KittSelena_Kittover 18 years ago
Nice!

Great tension building, good characterization. I had a feeling that was why his name was Nick.. .<grin> Good job, good luck!

dreampilot79dreampilot79over 18 years ago
Great Job BT

Very good story BT.. enjoyed it. Good luck!

Extreme BohunkExtreme Bohunkover 18 years ago
Realistic

Nice job of capturing her feelings. She didn't turn into 'SuperSlut' at the drop of a hat, she had to be seduced. Nice touch.

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101over 18 years ago
I liked it

but I thought the ending was something of a let down. I would have continued it to another sex scene, possibly involving Sylvia.

I was unsure if Nick and Freda were living together or not. It sounded like it but you didn't mention it.

Anonymous
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