All Comments on 'Nicky tries a Different Path'

For a story outside your comfort zone, you did a good job creating a sexy scenario. One small technical comment: consider replacing some of your commas with periods. Only Faulkner can get away with paragraph long sentences.

Great story, reminds me of my first experience with a woman. Thanks loved it. Please write more.

Writing style pretty loose (I'm being polite)

ii was a little scattered, but so hot. please take your time and add more.