All Comments on 'Niece Marie Pays Uncle Mark Back'

Not incest. His wife's niece. And her step sister. Should you involve either of the moms, well now we're talking. And I know, some will say it is taboo. But as I l, and others, frequently say, isn't every story here taboo to someone? When most people see taboo, they think of the movie series, Taboo, ergo, incest. Still, it was a good story. I give it a 5, just for hotness.

Yes, really make this taboo.... uncle winds up dumping wife, and knocking up both nieces! The three wind up setting up house, living happily ever after, with their mom joining in the fun every now and then... and who knows, possibly winding up pregnant too.

You have the gift: just keep writing. Make it dirtier, if you are of a mind to do so. Either way, please continue!

Good story, but blowjobs don't get 5*.

OH C'MON, you've got to keep this story going. What a great start!