by dogeme
This story lacked build up and plausibility. Keep it up though.
I know half of these stories aren't 100% believable which is fine, but a Pepsi can dick completely ruined it for me! I couldn't not imagine it and it just made the whole thing really odd...there was no build up, she just started going at it, which again is unbelievable! This needs some serious work
Written with the skill of a 14 yr old. Find a new hobby as you clearly are not suited to writing erotic stories !
mom, son, and nephew is welcome, but not with this story. try harder.
8 inch diameter? That threw me for a loop, since that's like 3 pepsi cans, bro. I was hoping the story would still work out, but it wasn't plausible. Good try?
Would love movie night with aunt.
This story went straight to it though with no build up....
3 stars from me.