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All Comments on 'Night Class: The Final Chapter'
by captivate
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gravyrugover 13 years agoNice enough
I would've preferred more dialogue, and it seemed to rush through some important bits. More showing, less telling.
The_Pedantabout 9 years agoSugary!
All too, too, perfeck :-)
BTW - "gotten" is a horridly ugly word!
Yes, I know it's American usage, along with the equally horrid "visit with", when the meaning is clearly " talking with"
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