All Comments on 'Night in Montreal'

Looking forward to some more of your writing, where this goes.

It is called aids clinic and the curb the special place for open bottom sluts.

Now if her husband can meet some great lady and get some good loving they would both be happy.

So now hubby is useless and too small for even a mouse.

Every, I mean every, other man in the world is bigger, better and more erotic than dumb ass hubby. So way would she even want to stay with a man who travels so much and when hes home is dead in bed and to stupid to talk to? Oh shit that's right the money! But wait she could make at least $10 (Canadian, $3 US)walking downtown nightly.

She is nothing but a MCGSB kick her the curb and move on.

for hubby... She'll be thinking of her "Big" stud instead of the man she married. Bummer...

great storie we love it .

sam & jojo

Written by a gay man. We have evolved so normal size is best. Women don't want big cock - only gay men want big cocks.

is a homophobic old man!!

This post resonated with me. I felt the need to explore and the thrill and excitement of having another. Thank you for sharing this very sexy post!

I don't understand the hostile comments. This seems to be an honest attempt to describe her feelings in detail. Events happen like this to many people although she seems to have lucked out in getting a good lover first try. I do agree that if this is real life, she should be more careful about using condoms with complete strangers. If she gets a bug of some kind that will really give hubby something to get pissed about.

It's so nice to read from a femal perspective - keep it up and thanks

I READ YOUR RESPONSE, TO MY LAST COMMENTS. I AGREE WITH YOUR REASONING 100%; HOWEVER, AFTER WRITING AND POSTING A GOOD STORY OR EVEN A NOT SO GOOD ONE, READERS HAVE THE SAME RIGHTS TO LIKE, DISLIKE OR JUST DONT GIVE A "SHIT". I, WHEN I FIND A STORY I LIKE OR REALLY DISLIKE I PLAN ON GIVING THE AUTHOR CREDIT, WHERE CREDIT IS DUE OR OVERDUE. YOUR "DONT CARE ANYMORE" IS ALSO A SONG TITLE AND IS A GOOD STORY. IT HAS THE STAND ALONE CAPABILITY ON ITS OWN WHILE LEAVING ROOM FOR A SEQUEL OR ANOTHER CHAPTER OR TWO. AS WITH MOST/ALL ARTISTS THEY WORK INSPURTS OR WHEN THE CREATIVE URGES STRIKE THEM. IF ONE RESEARCHES MUSICIANS AND ARTISTS AS TO TIME, LOCATION AND OCCURENCES YOU WOULD BE AMAZED AS TO THE SIMILARITY OF ALL. JUST LIKE EVOLUTION, WE DIDNT SPLIT FROM THE EGGS BUT DEVELOPED SIMUTANEOULY. RESPECTFULLY TK U MLJ LV NV

I like your story, Ishyone. It has parallels as to what goes on these days with internet chat and webcams. Your descriptions of the sexual intensity is backed by your female perception of sex. Women have a better way of describing what it feels like. Keep on writing.

gsnowman from NN

i think every married man/woman understands what u must have felt before doing it.

only u had the guts to go all the way.

awsome!

It is a common failure in these stories: the writer describes a sneaky cheater who goes through quite a bit of trouble to finally get the cherry on the sundae. But when the big event comes...hardly anything is elaborated. No situation drawn out. No fireworks or lurid detail. Just a few bland statements!

Read the initial events of the encounter. Ok, the guy is a great kisser - that part is acceptably explained. So, she says she had an orgasm but the description is like reading a pill bottle.

This is fascinating. Again, this woman went through quite a bit of trouble to cheat, going all the way to Montreal from Totown - that's gotta be 500 miles. But when she finally gets the monster man meat inside of her the story wouldn't fill a thimble. Here it is:

"He reached so far in that I kept jolting and getting more and more small orgasms until the biggest one hit and it was when he came in me and filled me up with his cum."

Then,

"We continued several times throughout the night but the first time he exploded in me was the most memorable one."

It's nice for her to have a memorable fuck but the readers will never remember because she has a couple of "jolts" and then the writer gets amnesia.

Fascinating.

Poor thing. She’s a whore now, and always will be.

HOT story, but there's no need to feel guilty or cry. You went out and got what you needed. Sounds like you need it more often.