All Comments on 'Night Intrusion'

by Misschievous1

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Wow!

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Waiting on the next chapter. (Take your time, though - don't hurry and spoil it)

lordchilworthlordchilworthover 15 years ago
naughty

naughty, wicked, delicious, horny.... fuck yeah

AhabscribeAhabscribeover 15 years ago
A delicious start!

A wonderful beginning of what sounds like will be a naughty, sexy romp (your bio lends itself to more naughty speculative thought as well - bravo for the tease). I look forward to seeing where you take this!

foxxxiefoxxxieover 15 years ago
Excellent

Great start. Only a couple of mistakes as well, not that I am one to talk on that. So, excellent story. Thank you. One thing: you have some past tense, present tense problems. Just a small check. Still I thought your opening was strong, and you were inticing all the way through, leaving me wanting the next piece.

walkingeaglewalkingeagleover 15 years ago
Super erotic! Very good!

Great work! You've got my attention!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
loved it ..

good start ..

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
WhatAPerve!

Loved It!

Ambien?

BICURIOUSBLKGRLBICURIOUSBLKGRLalmost 5 years ago
Loving it so far

I knkw this is a series and I mistakenly almost read them out of order but I am glad I didn't. I am so wet right now just thinking about the possibilities with the men (family) here in my house right now. I am routinely trying "not" to get caught during my daily self fucking sessions. I knkw for a fact I have been heard and watched as I will only do it when there are people home. It's my niece and nephew (twins) that I am waiting to catch me. My niece has come knocking right as I cum several times so I knkw she can hear me and of course I tell her to cum in. Ok off to read and cum more. I have a free day today and I plan to spend it cumming. Thank you for the assistance. 😘

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