All Comments on 'Night Moves'

OMIGOD! That was so freaking hot. The buildup was so intense that I felt like I was in the room. Please tell me that there's more of this story coming.

A good story very realistic. Descriptions are good, especially size comparison. Keep writing you are believable

For a story with so little actual sex involved, this story is without a doubt as hot and erotic as it gets. I found myself getting so involved in what was going on in this little play with unspoken words, that I was hanging on every word. This is an ideal story for those of us who are not gay, but have had these moments where... you get the idea. Intense is the word that comes to mind. I'm hoping there is more to follow.

I liked the way this story was written and descripted. The plot was well structered as it was short and sweet but easy to pick up on. The story was an amzing turn-on and at the same time was tragic yet realistic. Keep up the good work!