All Comments on 'Night of the Boat Party'

Bad Student, bad writer.

And stay with it.

Terrible writing.

The writing on this is so bad that I assume it is a computer translation of a story written in a another language. Improper word usage, totally bizarre sentence structure, constantly changing tenses, and comma splices galore make this difficult and almost painful to read. If not a computer translation for a writer for whom English is a second langauge, then someone needs to go back to school.

Nice story but I hate condoms.

I am usually the one to criticize poor grammar. There was plenty of that in this story, but there was also a sense of "true story." True or not, the writer did a very good job of conveying it as such. (Credit where credit is due.)

As for condom use, as I recall the story, that was Lizzy's choice. Those that reject a girl's request for condom use are usually left at home stroking themselves into the nearest sock. (Again, credit where credit is due!)

In the anticipation of off-setting the bareback, solo strokers, my vote is a 5.

I tried to read on through the bad sentence structure and lines that didn't make any sense, but it was too much work. Maybe the other commentor was correct that this was put through a auto - translator

It's a good story, but the bad grammar ruins it. Run on sentences encompass entire paragraphs, tenses change, & Yoda breaks in every once in a while with "her tits, perky they were."