All Comments on 'Night Out'

very very nice story

What an incredible story love. Very hot! I only wish that I was that woman you were loving in that limo. hmmmm

There is a good sense of the reckless abandon of drink, allowing swift submission to new experience. The sex is pacey and hot. A good read.

all i can say is wow im wet

i think it could have used more dialoge at the sex part to make it more yummy. though it made me wet anyways.. wish it was me. keep writing.

Very arousing. You perfectly create a sense of heat, sweat and desire. My only nitpicky complaint is that you switch from past to present tense a few times, which took me out of the story as I was reading it. Still, that's a technical thing. The essence of what you wrote it still very erotic. Keep writing, I say.

A lovely, short and hot story. I almost was too distracted by the way you switched tenses there in a couple paragraphs, but the heat was enough. Nice read. Thanks.