All Comments on 'Night Visits Ch. 03'

More please

fantastic, love to read some more please

Hot sexy ertico !!!!!!!!!!! Mmmmmmmmmmmmm. Don't stop more!!!!!!!!!!!

Just mom and Kyle.. don't add friends, cousins,uncles etc.. just them.. if dad catches them.. fine.. but now spice it up, dates hotels dress her up fir Kyle.. nylons heels, sure impregnate her.. but plz do not ruin it

I like your formatting; quick hits to build up, fantastic climax. I love the sexy detail, and the hot talk. I'm loathe to make suggestions on how this progresses, but the pair getting more and more brazen would be hot. Lingerie, finger-fucking in the kitchen while dad is in the other room. The cuckold dad is a theme I want to explore in my own writing. Thank you.

I have thoroughly enjoyed these first three chapters and I truly hope they continue BUT please have someone proof read the story BEFORE you post it... several time He when it should of been Her or He when it should have been She... it interrupted the flow. I still thoroughly enjoyed them and hope they continue... maybe fucking in her bed while dad sleeps next to them, or she get pregnant,,, but I agree with it staying just the two of them (Dad can watch but not participate) just suggestions. Keep the stories coming!

Mom and Son both get what they want.

Keep up the good work

Thoroughly enjoyed!

I loved all 3 of these stories. None of the typical 3-4 pages of build up before the sex begins. I love how you get right to the point.

Pregnant mom, cuckholded dad, mom riding with swollen belly and leaking breasts

Finish the story!!! ! Don't keep us hanging!!!!! Doing great so far so keep it going!!!!

A perfect end to a great story. This is a dream cum true for many sons furiously jerking their cocks to this fantastic story. While jerking off on your sleeping mother provides a visceral kink for many having mommy suck and fuck us would be incredible. The thought of humping away into mommy’s pussy, no condom just a bare cock sliding between mommy’s wet, fat, pussy lips, and having mommy stop you from pulling out...in fact begging to be bred by her son is the ultimate kink many of us wish to hear. Nothing is sexier than a 40 year old wife/mother seeing her belly swell with her sons love child.

WOW!!!!!!! Fantastic writer. Have been reading most of your stories. Keep them coming.

Stupidly simple.

Bill S.

Miranda needs a baby bump!