All Comments on 'Night with the Nanny Ch. 04'

Very hot !! Wonder if we can expect Ch. 05 before 2020 ?

You have to write chapter 5 NOW!!!

Bedtimewords I finished reading the 4 chapters of Night With the Nanny. I absolutely loved it! You did a wonderful job of thoroughly explaining each nuance of the story so that I could feel the emotion, the eroticism, the sexual pull & the arousal that was so consuming. Please do not stop! I NEED to read what happens next. You can't leave a woman hanging like this. It's cruel & unusual punishment. I know you said that this was your first submission but you write as though you have done it before, many times in fact. I like the way you ease into each part taking your time to set the scene so that it can be an all encompassing experience for your reader. It was arousing, sexually charged, flirty, fun & I so look forward to reading the rest of this story. Please hurry, but make it worth our having to wait.