All Comments on 'Nightly Massage'

by purringlady

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Get out of your own way

Pretty awful, really -- completely overwritten and amatuerishly breathy. The writer spends so much time emphasizing the specialness of the scenario that there is none.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Please don't stop !

Great story well written and very erotic. Very vivid discriptions. Wife and I are waiting eagerly for your subsequent submissions.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
too short

Your story is good, a little longer would make it better.

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