All Comments on 'Nights at the Gas Station Ch. 06'

Please do write a sequel!

Is that good enough for you?

I think its fine for an ending. Please leave the poor girl alone. Let it be a happy ending. :)

great job and adding more to her life now that her eyes, mind and body are opening up would be a joy to read so please do tell us more of her tale.

But i'm gonna have to stop here. I prefer happy endings. I don't think I can deal with her becoming a hot wife, and still say she loves him or just leave him. I wanna pretend that was it and she goes back (or try) to go back to her husband.

you really need to write a follow up to this story

Probably the best story i hav read in a really long time, not jst for the erotic content of it, but also the way it engrossed me.. its d 1st time i hav read a whole series in one go.. (well apart frm getting up nd cleaning myself a few times..lolzz..) Seriously, amazing chracters all of them. "Perfection at its best" (i knw its an incorrect statement, just said it to convey my feelings)..

Take Care.

If you follow up with a sequel, keep Savitri in character giving her religious and cultural background.

It is one of the best story I have read in Litrotica.com. I felt eroticism oozing out from your words as jism from an ejaculating cock. Your description of an orgasm, comparing it to a white rabbit and a pink unicorn is simply inspired. What is even more satisfying in the story is that it has tensions other than just the description (outstanding as it is) of the act of fucking. Keep up the good work. I was getting hard from just reading it. What else can one ask of an erotic story!

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Hi,

I love your stories and hope you get a chance to write more of your stories. Look forward to seeing them.

Mario Puzo would be proud of this !!! I think im gonna make a movie based on this story.

US, how would you like a 25% proceeds from the money that I make from that?

plssssss make the sequel for this. I really mean it.

has all the makings of a thriller

Liked the whole series except the death part. It should have been replaced with some small accident or her husband being in the same motel because of which she might have to hurry getting out of the place & because of which she had to lose her all clothes; coming out naked, taken away in car by the helping guys & then finally indulging in a gangbang with her consent.

Hi there,this was one hell of a story.Honestly as they say never judge a book by its cover,your stories shouldn't be judged by their title.your stories are mind blowing.

As i had mentioned in the earlier comment,yes the death/murder was a bit of dampner.But the way Savitri warms up to Troy,its bind made in distress,partners in crime stuff.Surely a sequel would be awesome.

thanks

Keep on writing when savitri isnt stoping why should u go on girl let us enjoy her life

U write super sexy!!!

Really marvelous story!!!plssssssssssss Write more!!!!!!!!!! :) :D

OMG! YOU ARE THE FINEST WRITER ON LITEROTICA, A GIFTED ONE FOR SURE. YOU SET A PACE AND CARRY ON SMOOTHLY. REALISTIC AND RISING EROTICA YOU ARE JUST MARVELOUS.

The best ever story! You rock!

Very thrilling read... Liked your build up

We require a sequel please

What a beautiful fuck story

It has been a long time since you wrote this story but I truly wish you would revisit Savitri ... After all her adventures are just beginning and she needs to reward Troy with more than just a one night fling ... Also she has nothing to pay back Troy’s helpers with except her body if I am not mistaken... And though Floyd was able to talk his Hotel owner out of firing him by saying he was showing a room to a prospective visitor while being robbed he never got Savitri out of his thoughts... The police were never called to the Hotel over the blood stained rug or the stolen equipment because the owner of the Hotel was an illegal of Indian descent ... His brother-in-law who owned a carpet and tile warehouse changed the carpets and all evidence disappeared ... Six weeks after the “accident” Savitri sat in the parking lot of the Hotel parking lot after just taking her husband to the airport for a two week trip to Oakland ... She had been there since 5:45 AM not even sure what she wanted was still there ... She saw two cars arrive right before 7:00 AM ... At 7:12 she saw Floyd come trough the doors and head towards the main highway ... Unsure where he was going she started her Mustang and right before he crossed the sidewalk heading to the bus stop she pulled up beside him on the passenger side ... He was startled and stopped dead in his tracks ... Savatri leaned over as Floyd was bending down and he could see down the top of her white tee shirt and also saw that her thighs were bare ... “Did you miss me Floyd?” As Floyd with a wide grin reached for the door handle ...

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Nice one! Could have chosen a name other than Savitri.( Indians will understand). In any sequel please do not humiliate the husband, destroy the marriage or make the woman a slave of Troy. That would really be so gross and offputting !

That's hell of a story, made me late for my office, I'm gonna think of Savitri for the rest of the day or maybe night as well. Okay bye bye

By far one of my favourite story on literotica. I read it already 4-5 times. I'd love to see what happens further. I want savitri to be more naughty😜. Please wright more please 🙏🥺

I just finished this series and i am deeply disappointed from the outcome. The first 2 chapters were extremely well written and interesting but after that it's downhill... There is mo consistency, no character development, a narration all over the place , sex description is lazy and suddenly the seriousness, thoughts and consequences of real life don't matter anymore for your Mary Sue. Why did you give up on the husband wife roleplay, this was making her adventures relatable. Anyway... 1*