All Comments on 'Niki Cleans for John'

I loved the way you centered the story on John's emotional state, his mix of euphoria at living a fantasy and apprehension at possible performance failure or Niki suddenly ending it all. Well written and a pleasure to read.

thank you

Yet another author who can't get off the rock and join the general world population in use of some common terms. For the author, most use "panties" not "knickers" that and other terms likely unknown meaning due to being localisms serve to confuse as the reader hasn't a clue as meaning.

who doesn't understand that a majority of the world's English speakers don't use the strange language of US English.

Mr "get off the rock" Anonymous takes the author to task for his use of language, but does so in a message so wildly incoherent that it would not be admitted as good English in any part of the world. Beams and motes come to mind.