All Comments on 'Nikki's Performance'

I wasn't expecting the other guy to fuck her, I thought our hero would be up on stage showing off. Liked the idea of one girl giving him a blow job as he watches his love on stage, would like to try that myself. Thanks for writing.

did not like the ending. you took a good story and ruined it.

This was a well written story with a surprise in the tail. Yes, the writer could have gone for a happy ending. How much better to give readers a twist. How many more people are now waiting eagerly to read a follow up story. A happy ending would have been the finish of it. I for one appreciate the titillation. Well done

...and much more intriguing than the commonly sought after happy ending. Well Done!

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performance of Nikki ruins his love