All Comments on 'Nikki's Summer School'

Love your story. It's the best so far that I've read amongst participants in the Summer Lovin' 2021 Contest. As a a former Volunteer Editor, I found only one item that stuck out - two speakers' quoted statements in same paragraph, Ryan & Nikki about to be intimate, middle of 2nd page. Separate paragraph for each quoted speaker. I only comment with constructive criticism on quality writing such as yours. Great content, doesn't need editing. 5 stars

I enjoyed it

I think the lesson you learned summed it up for everyone very well. Kindness, passion, sharing stripped of foolish moral boundaries allows the best to come out. Many times we are crippled by things other than our physical limitations. Creek

I really liked this story. Sex and a good story, what else do you want ?

Well written as well, congratulations.

Fantastic story, set with we old timers in top billing. Arizona is a great backdrop of drought to desert down pour giving the artist a beautiful array of colors (people) to nurture into mature lush landscapes.

You had a great story going until you closed with THE END.

You seem to think we didn't know there were no more words left. That's an insult to your readers.

***Thanks for the entertaining read.

Beautiful story with great passionate sex. Love it.

Beautiful! Love is always best when it is shared. Definitely 5 stars.

Very nicely done! Loved it!

Absolutely divine.

Very well written!

Ryan is a true gentleman -- concerned and loving to all. I imagine him with a beautifully hairy chest to please all those women who learn so much from him while he gains pleasure for himself too!