All Comments on 'Nilofar Pt. 02'

by Deceptivedomain

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
GODDD! I LOVE IT!!

Part 2 wass greaatt!!! I loved it so much! I'm a big fan of your works!!!! Please make more amazing storiess! Can't wait to read Part 3!! Lovee youu <3 <3

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Awesome

Can't wait for part 3.

stroudlestroudlealmost 6 years ago
Great chapter

Im really enjoying this series . nicley written with great style.

Thank you

fishingrod48fishingrod48almost 6 years ago
Excellent

This is becoming an amazing story so well written I cannot wait for your next chapter.

ChironomidChironomidalmost 6 years ago
Original and interesting

Great story. I didn't know what to think at the beginning of part 1, but it has me hooked now. Keep going!

DeceptivedomainDeceptivedomainalmost 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks

I'm really thankful to everyone for their support and kind words. I'm lucky to find readers who aren't only into sex, sex and more sex but, also interested in a story. Working on this story for more than three years now, but, still not satisfied, because i know that i may write another dozen or fifty or hundred stories but i can't create a plot as good as this one. Not sure how many more parts it may take but, once you read the complete story, i will certainly love to hear your opinion on it. Thanks.

CliterateDykeCliterateDykealmost 6 years ago

I'm so thoroughly enchanted by these characters & the story. What a wonderful "slow burn" this excellent story is. These are the stories I love more than anything, beautifully created narratives with wonderfully developed characters who build a deep relationship concurrent with a sexual bond. Your writing is gorgeous & is such a gift. Thank you so much for this absolute treasure.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Excellent and well worth waiting for. Can’t wait for the next chapter, chapters?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More more more

Cant wait for the next chapters such a great start to a great story.

DeceptivedomainDeceptivedomainover 5 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Submitted part 3 today.

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4ualmost 5 years ago

Hmm, that was kinda sleazy what Jess did to Nilofar. She had plenty of time and opportunities to put on some clothes. It's not so innocent any more. Oh well, it's still a nice lesfict

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyalmost 2 years ago

Sweet innocence ......a lovely romance and both girls are kind of clumsy ..... But its ao cute to slow burner the slow get together the teasing ...... This paints a lovely smile onto my heart

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