All Comments on 'Nina's Birthday Dilemma'

"Her 140 lbs. were carried on a 5'4", 140 lb., 40-26-36 body."

I think you said 140# --twice in the same sentence even.

"One guy gave him a phone number of a woman who ran a wrestling school for women. He gave the woman a call and she told Rick to come on down to the school. They could talk there.

"Rick got there and met with the woman. Her name was Larissa."

You could have produced Larissa's name a the beginning of this. You used too many words to get here.

Yeah, this is a fantasy, but Nina should have had a few weeks at the club getting some training. having a core of solid moves and knowing what she was doing would be been beneficial.

I enjoyed your story. I'd love to read more of Nina on the mats.

This story needs to continue...as Rick and Nina’s relationship progresses further, how she treats her family afterward and any fallout there, etc. so many ways to explore more!