All Comments on 'Nina's Night Out'

Good descriptions, good mood and setting, nice pacing. Keep up the good work!

Loved it, too.

wow, fascinating!!

Nina, I like the way you detail the dress and makeup of your protagonists. It's something I forget to do in my stories, but I think it adds reality. I want to write stories that appeal to women, and detailing the self-consciousness and awareness of what makes them attractive, (or not, sometimes) makes the story more intimate. This one gets into the nitty gritty in a way most readers will like. I fancy the idea of tales where the actors are wondering about what they are doing and maybe trying to back out before giving in. If this is a gal's first time with another woman, what does it feel like to her to kiss, taste, be touched by another woman for the first time?