All Comments on 'Nine Hundred Square Feet'

That was a master class of writing technique right there. Thank you!

Hope there’s a part 2

Please tell me there is a part 2

I'm working on a part 2. Thanks for the great feedback.

Good premise and lots of potential for a short series.

Looking forward to chapter 2. Well done.

I really liked when Haley told Peter what she wanted. I hope you continue this story.

Please don't make the girls do anything lesbian. In fact, it would be nice if Haley and Peter developed a committed one-on-one relationship. However, if it does become a harem, keep the girls straight.

If she knew he was going to come, why not just keep her mouth on his penis instead of waiting with her mouth open like a dope? Showing him a mouth full of cum and then proving she swallowed is stupid and gross. All of that makes it seem as though you're taking cues from bad pornos. I come here to read better porn than what bad porno videos have to offer.