All Comments on 'Niv & Ved'

by Duvidha

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Loved it!

Loved every inch of the story, especially in the Indian context. Hope you write the 2nd chapter soon :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Total Rubbish

Put it in the bin and don.t write any more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Delicious.

So wish I could fuck her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Nice

Excitement works up nicely. Looking forward to more lusty and mad fucking sessions. Long live Incest.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Good setup but less Incest...

Story setup is very good and even the incest building is good but the main part of incest - hot, mad and steamy fucking sessions - was altogether left out with an abrupt end....Good writing but inculcate the important parts of fucking sessions....

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