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26thNC26thNCalmost 3 years ago

Again, it may be one of your earlier efforts, but it’s still a really good story.

HooHaa77HooHaa77over 2 years ago

Meh. The "reasoning" Ginger gives for her going insane is weak (at least not devloped enough) and almost an afterthought.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Anon from a year ago - your comment about anal being gay would be true with another guy. With a woman, don't knock it till you try it (prepping is important). If you're not at least be open minded with your spouse she may look for someone who is.

Great little tale Q!

somewhere east of Omaha

pummel187pummel187about 2 years ago

This man sounds like an adolescent... Every word that comes from his mouth reminds me of dialogue from. "Dumb and Dumber" or "Kingpin" lol. WTF

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Ginger got screwed in the divorce.....good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Ginger got what she deserved. What happened to the Monster?

4*

BJ

fishgetterfishgetterover 1 year ago

What would cause an airbag inflation, when hitting something in reverse?

xhristianjxhristianjover 1 year ago

So Mr Beta Male is such a fucking pussy he knows his wife is cheating but let's her do it and just waits for her to drop the hammer? And then his high school crush is left sitting around for years in fact marrying someone else again before he finally makes a move? Fuck this guy loves used Pussy guess that makes him a fucking CUCKOLD then🤣🤣

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good story. @fishgetter the same sensors that would cause the airbags to inflate at any other time. LP

iammweaseliammweaselover 1 year ago

Sorry but this was too stupid by half about 3 paragraphs down to even be slightly palatable except to anyone thats easily impressed by things like the magic that is jello!!

No idea where this shitting mess went, but I couldnt find enough hate of myself to keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

4 stars. Would have been 5, but the bullshit of one year probation was too much. Yes, women are given lighter sentences, and are always presumed innocent in any domestic dispute. However, all of that goes away if a woman injures a police officer. If a judge decides to not give felony prison time when an officer was hurt like that, all the other officers would ruin that judge.

ZK

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nice.

0ldfart0ldfartabout 1 year ago

This story shows that sometimes less is more. The story is told fully without unnecessary padding.

Oh, and to those who decry unlikely responses, it is FICTION! You want facts, read a dictionary.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Too bad it’s fiction. It would make a great true tale.

Bill S.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

A pretty decent story, but poorly executed. I appreciate that this one isn't as drawn out and wordy as several others of yours that I've read, but too much telling instead of showing is a big issue.

tralan69ertralan69er10 months ago

@sbrooks103x,

...“She says she likes it, but I think she only does it to please me.” Why not take her at her word?

Why not take it as written?

Calico75Calico7510 months ago

Lots of advantages to being a good guy in a small town, and that's the truth.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

The story reminds me of that famous Wendy's hamburger commercial: "Where's the Beef?"

Which I now paraphrase: "Where's the Erotica?" The "Sex"?

Needless to say, an irrelevant, boring disappointment.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Another good story from a master teller of tales. Personally I'd rather read a well crafted tale with little or no sex in it than one with loads of "his monster 12 inch cock pounded my tight nubile pussy until I exploded in fireworks after my 15th orgasm and then we did it again while hanging upside down from the curtain pole" statements accompanying no real plot. Of course we'll written hot sex scenes with a great story is the preferred option but the important part is the well written tale which this is. As always thank you for writing this. BardnotBard

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I much prefer these types of stories...ones well told with a decent plot and very little or no sex. Just implied sex. Reading a 3 page story where 2 and a half pages are all sex and no story is sooooooo boring, not to mention repetitive. And stories with HUGE cocks and EXTRA LARGE breasts are the worst!! Keep everything normal for a change. Like 98% of the people in the world are.

PhoenixLore1981PhoenixLore19818 months ago

This was a good story it played the long game and showed a different aspect to these types of stories posted in this category while that part still throws me lol the fact it didn't contain the lover or soon to be lover having a ungodly size dick and everything made it even better if loving wife stories has to contain the wife cheating then they should be close to something like this now the use of sweet cheeks and all her different titles was too far fetched as well as anal sex being against the law in nine different states I have never heard tell of that shit in any state and I have been to every state except Hawaii

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Top notch story, us usual, Q. Thanks for sharing.

5⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

WisquejacWisquejac8 months ago

As always, a nice story. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

There are states where anal sex with a woman is illegal!? Fuck those places lol

oldpantythiefoldpantythief5 months ago

Loved this story, had me grinning most of the way through it. Always nice when the cheated on can come out ahead of the game by just being calm and doing what's right. Wasn't ready for Officer John being a switch hitter though, lol.

Calico75Calico755 months ago

Very good story. Well written!

Kernow2023Kernow20234 months ago

a good humoured story , once worked with a similar "sweet cheeks" - most violent officer in the office

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Suddenly they have a 5yr old daughter which wasn't mentioned in the divorce.

Did senile forget?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

To anony, "Suddenly they have a 5yr old daughter"...

Wake up and read it again, it's a daughter with Sweet Cheeks, dope.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

That old boy had a lot of nerve, talking to “Sweet Cheeks” like that while at the gun range. And while she was shooting. Yep, a lot of nerve. Great stuff, Q, thanks for sharing it.

5 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

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