All Comments on 'No Accounting for Love'

by marybethf

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tadajtadajover 17 years ago
nice work

I thought you combined eroticism and reality pretty well here; thogh not sure that any judge would act quite so quickly in taking a child from itsmother. Thanks for the effort, I think I'll see if youv'e written more stories.

aj

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Fantastic! Beth hits another homerun

Loved the way Judy held back and just lusted over Kate for so long and didn't just jump in bed in the first paragraph.

The whole custody thing didn't bother me since it wasn't clear what kind of custody he got (temporary, etc.) or if he was just blowing smoke out his ass and kidnapping the kid.

Keep up the great work Beth, please!

Julie

TE999TE999over 17 years ago
Enjoyable story

Another excellent tale, Beth. Sympathetic characters and a believeable plot. Love is not always easy, but it's worth it.

Kudos!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Awesome as always!

Crisp story telling that is

Right on the money!

It's amazing how the

People in your stories are quick,

Psychological studies in the reality of

Love, life, and have more than surface

Energy!

Eileen

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
What ever happened to

This is a GREAT story....but whatever happened to the one-legged fetish stories? Those were awesome.

Cassandra

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
What happened?!?!?!

Can't understand why I haven't

Read anything new by you

In some time now.

Please,

Please write some more

Love stories for me to

Enjoy

Eileen

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
not realistic!

No good mother would allow him to just disappear with her child, no matter who she lives or how much!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Her husband didn't appreciate her. He was an ass but how could you love a lover more than your own child?

Anonymous
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