by marybethf
I thought you combined eroticism and reality pretty well here; thogh not sure that any judge would act quite so quickly in taking a child from itsmother. Thanks for the effort, I think I'll see if youv'e written more stories.
aj
Loved the way Judy held back and just lusted over Kate for so long and didn't just jump in bed in the first paragraph.
The whole custody thing didn't bother me since it wasn't clear what kind of custody he got (temporary, etc.) or if he was just blowing smoke out his ass and kidnapping the kid.
Keep up the great work Beth, please!
Julie
Another excellent tale, Beth. Sympathetic characters and a believeable plot. Love is not always easy, but it's worth it.
Kudos!
Crisp story telling that is
Right on the money!
It's amazing how the
People in your stories are quick,
Psychological studies in the reality of
Love, life, and have more than surface
Energy!
Eileen
This is a GREAT story....but whatever happened to the one-legged fetish stories? Those were awesome.
Cassandra
Can't understand why I haven't
Read anything new by you
In some time now.
Please,
Please write some more
Love stories for me to
Enjoy
Eileen
No good mother would allow him to just disappear with her child, no matter who she lives or how much!
Her husband didn't appreciate her. He was an ass but how could you love a lover more than your own child?