All Comments on 'No Brave Nude World Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

A good start to a longer story perhaps? It felt a little rushed but that's okay. It takes time to describe a new alien world and its hard to do it in a shorter story. BTW 'parsec' is a unit of length not time. 5 parsecs is roughly equal to 100 trillion miles. I was going to suggest 'parsex' perhaps but Hedons don't understand humor!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Good story

Hope that there will more of this brave nude world

JackandJilldoJackandJilldoabout 4 years agoAuthor
I added the T though...

Yes, you are correct about a parsec. That is why I added the T at the end, to kind of keep the sci-fi sound, but make it a bit different. I love your suggestion though! ParSEX would have have been awesome! Thanks for tuning in.

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeabout 4 years ago

Hmm... a free sex world with zero sense of humor? I wonder what we'll learn in Part 2?

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