All Comments on 'No Escape'

a pretty damn good read. very enjoyable. my only real complaint is that the sex scene could've been a bit longer and/or more well described.

Now you’ve got us intrigued. Great start please keep them coming.

A few minor typos, but hardly worth mentioning.

5*

Tc

Please continue

Hate cliffhangers. Mediocre lead in the a story entitled "The Escape"..... Need to wait until you've written the whole story to submit!

Sex with your sister can be far beyond what is normally experienced, therefore better, much better, then expected.

Where's the Yandere? You finished the story to early.

Out - Fu**ing - Standing !!!!!

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Slut sister is not much of a turn on. Hard to believe there is any real affection as she went with the intent of just getting fucked and didn't really care who it was.

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