by Jepasch
Ihr Anglisch-Grammatik ist gut, aber falls Sie ein Editor woellen Lit hat kostenlos.. uh... volunteer Editors? Sorry for my attempt at German, just if you ever want a look over on your English stories I've had great luck with them!
Really interesting concept and I'm curious about German culture and language too. It was a lot longer than expected and not as much sex/pain as I'd have liked but I can't wait to read more!
Different from anything else I have read on Lit, I am so happy to continue. There are some bits where the english goes awry, but it doesn't detract from an inteaguing story.