All Comments on 'No Longer a Game Ch. 05'

Really enjoying this series please keep it going

She's acting like an immature asshole to someone she loved literally hours before. On top of that, she seems to only have two conversation modes: seduction and screaming.

The story is decently written, but I really don't like your main character.

Did you not read that she is sort of a psychopath and has never loved anyone? She doesn't love Christie, she likes her for sex.

What the other anonymous miss is that Natalie really does need some balance. Now I would be kind of 'meh' if she caught an arrow with her eye.

This is not a series. It's a plagiarized rendition of a book published years ago - even down to the remark about where to out blankets when camping. I hope the sex scenes are better than this.