All Comments on 'No Longer the Little Church Girl'

of a magical metamorphosis :)

enjoyable and well told...hope to hear more from you soon. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

to read a story of a real woman who can be everything and who is secure enough with herself that she can be a slut for her husband (only).

Thanks.

Phil

....is HIMself a JERK

Very well done. A loving couple who aren’t letting their lives get stale in the sex department.

Don't pay attention to don-donna she has a lot of hate and she gives everyone a laugh on her meaninglessness, and lesbian leanings. She acts like anyone in stable monogamous relationship is perverted and that’s sad.

For many people -- myself included -- being called a slut in the midst of foreplay or in the throes of passion is actually quite erotic. Notice, don-donna, that the woman herself reveled in being his "slut," that she thought of herself in this manner. In her mind, "slut" = "sexual creature"; she could easily have used "whore" or "vixen" to the same effect. Quite simply, the term was a way to distance herself from the rather un-sexy reality of three kids and a full-time job. If she already used the "naughty" word to stimulate her fantasies of being teased and dominated, imagine how gratifying it would be for her to hear the same term from her lover's lips! Please do try to be understanding of others' kinks before you pass judgement.

As for the writing -- nicely done, 98941girl! I enjoy a steamy tale of monogamously committed sex which is anything but boring. It gives hope to those of us in the married-with-children set...

the world that they usually cannot attract a female who is not.

Very nice. The only thing I would like is maybe more dirty talking between the characters.

It is nice to read a story of a couple trying to keep the passion alive. The length is fine.

I really find that woman authors do a much better job of capturing true eroticism.

Just one thing: road is something you drive on, rode is the past tense of ride eg. "She rode his cock".