All Comments on 'No Love Lost'

by cahab

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
almost perfect

The story was almost perfect. I would only request a bit more background on the daughter to convince us of (1) her drive towards genuine slutiness/moral depravity, (2) her motivation for tempting her father and (3) her resolve to taking the situation all the way to the end (no pun intended...well, maybe just a little bit :^). Did she really have to fuck him to perfect her plan, or did she just get carried away, as hinted by her previously discussed sluttiness? Having said that, I came so hard I couldn't keep the screen in focus! Nice work.

PS-did you write a follow up for this story? I would love (or whatever it is we whackers "feel") to read it. Cheers.

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