by iWriter4U
That sounds like a long seventeen years, in between....
It was an odd start, and proceeded with two people admitting to their desires, and there was nice eroticism
Lovely that they were able to reunite and be happy
Loved it! The pace of the story was just right! Five stars and a favorite point!
Felt like a fuck buddy story but I did like how you ended it. 17 years is a huge gap in the story though.
I loved the story. I love how you wrote it and I almost felt like I was there. I found myself very excited.
Look forward to reading more of your writings.
This was a great story. I think it would have been better if the ending was a little different