All Comments on 'No More Beautiful Words'

Great story!

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Great story, Ann. I loved it. I wish I could find an accommodating sexagenarian like Lana or as I would call her, a younger woman! I doubt that I could come close to Scott's prowess, but it would be great to give it a try. I'm envious of Scott's good fortune especially the best of it all, the phone number. Thanks for writing this 5-star tale.

Awesome. Hope there is a ext time

Beautiful story from old Brooklyn. And a very good ending - full of possibilities even romance 😊

Best story teller here. Love your work.

As always another great story, please keep writing, long time reader.

Richard

Ann Douglas storrrrrrry!!!!!!!

So happy you put this up, I love your writing, the fleshed out characters, all that. Thank you thank you thank you!

another great story from you, love how you develop your storyline and characters. so well written and hard to believe it was four pages long. such a great story from one of lit's best storytellers.

Very entertaining. I do so enjoy your efforts.

Thank you. Another lovely story! ❤️❤️❤️

...as all of your tales, Anne. Nothing like this ever happened to me when I was a young man (sigh!). I liked Grease but you are right about the geriatric teenagers. Hollywood has the largest number of prematurely-aged teens in the world and it's been that way since... oh, The Blackboard Jungle. Still, keep writing five-star stories like this and I don't care how old your characters are.

Very well written thank you :)

You made me feel like a horny teenager again. As the other people say, you are very good at what you do!

Very well done. I'm glad you left room in the end for the possibility of more, rather than a one time fling.

Very enjoyable story, thank you!

A very well written and certainly very yummy story as only Ann Douglas can do! Thank you so much!

wellwritten,n enjoyable as always

Loved the reference to the MM Club. Well done.

Brilliant writing love your detail & character creation. The slow tension building is just right. Thank you Rob

*****What a great storyline from start to finish. I love your style of writing a complete story!!!!! Thanks for sharing this very entertaining read.

A really enjoyable romp. I can’t wait to read your other stories.

Especially a young one. Masterfully crafted from beginning to end. Great set up with Scott learning to appreciate older women at the photo shoot.

Delightful - I wish I had been so lucky all those years ago!

Utterly delightful, my favourite genre born out of a long-standing weakness for highly sexed older women. Your writing is always so good, your storytelling so authentic and as a result highly erotic. Thank you.

wonderful tail, lol! full of passion! thank you Ann

Truly enjoyed this and hope maybe there will be more?

Interesting story. It has a nice ending leaving a lot to the imagination, not the least of which would be the inclusion of the neighbor lady in future exploits. Great job, as expected.

You are still one of my favorites, Ann. Wonderful build up and the hot sex you know an older woman can enjoy. Now what about Peggy?

Loved it!!!!!

I never pass up the opportunity to read your stories. You have a way of drawing your reader into your narrative as if they are one of the characters you write about. Once again, a well written, engaging story.

Love this story. Maybe this time you could violate your rule and give us another chapter???

An Ann Douglas. Always makes my day. Thank you.

Nice! Love your stuff for years!

Love it! I wish at that age I had the chance to experience the skill of a woman in her 50s/60s... though I'm making up for lost time now!

Lovely. Makes me wish I had tried older ladies before I'd got to be an older man.

Great story. Very well written, as usual

An excellent story…. as always! Thanks for another delightful tale.

Brilliant tale, yet again

Peggy and Lana…. Maybe there is more to their relationship than mere neighbours which may form the basis of another story, especially since Peggy will need a lift everywhere as long as her car is having trouble??

Once again, I would like to thank everyone who read and commented on the story.

Your remarks were greatly appreciated.

Well done!

I missed you Ann Douglas

So glad to see a new story.

I hope there are more adventures for this may-to-December romance

So easy to relate to your story - and I know the area where it is set. You were my very first Literotica author, thanks for helping me lose my Lit virginity many years ago! Lovely to reconnect with your writing after a few years, thank you.

This story is outstanding, as yours always are.

Such a mature author too. Your story got me well aroused. Superb story.

I never fail to enjoy your stories, Ann. This one was extremely hot, and erotic.

Oh, my gosh ... I so loved this. I felt a bit emotional for Scott and Lana. How gently and patiently she guided him by showing a loving and accepting sexual experience. Reminds me of The Summer of 1942 movie all those decades ago. I have been widowed for over 10 years (at 56) and long for that intimacy again. Thank you for a marvelous and touching piece of writing.

This was one of the best that I have read from this wonderful author. I have been reading her stories now for over twenty years.. Thanks Ann.

It seems "beautiful words" are, in my opinion, required for this story. Wonderful, touching, caring seem like ones I can use to describe my feeling for this story and it's author. I read the "Mature" offerings because they usually explore the relationships between the main characters deeper than most other categories. So maybe there will be a "next time" for Scott and Lana. Thank you for a wonderful story.

A low keyed yet brilliant masterpiece. Your stories are real treasures!

Touching, tender, and oh so sexy! WELL DONE and THANK YOU!!!

You take the time to set the story background up in a most pleasing way. I dislike it when within a few paragraphs people are banging away at each other. (I know it might happen---but to me it isn't overly realistic.) I really enjoy your writing and stories--and l hope like most--that someday something like that would happen to me!! LOL! Thanks for a great read!

I left a comment a minute ago--but forgot to log in....hopefully you will find it on the same date..... A great read. Thoroughly enjoyable--as are most all your stories.

Ann, I always enjoy reading your 5 * stories. You and I have corresponded a few times over the years, and you know that older women have turned me on. Unlike Scott, I, in 1956 was a a Junior in high school and a virgin. We lived on a farm, and our 38 year-old neighbor live a 1/4 mile from us, but I always masturbated thinking of her. One night she picked me up and took me to a drive-in theater and parked on the back row, and I lost my virginity that night. That mature woman taught me more about how to please a woman over the years than all others through out my lifetime. I will never forget her.