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by VirgoPisces

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Paiger123Paiger1238 months ago

Good start but you need a proofreader/ editor.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy8 months ago

Good beginning!

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

There were so many typos and missing words that I stopped reading halfway through the first page. The characters weren't very interesting either.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Nice premise, too many spelling errors, missing words spoil the flow

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

TOTALLY HAWT!!!!!

THANK YOU for a fun story.

Be Well and Happy

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Having always been a bookworm, in love with the written word, I decided to become a writer. Soon after, I decided to challenge myself to become a diverse writer. Everything I write is fiction/imagination it's never the same story.