All Comments on 'No One to Blame Ch. 02'

This looks like the beginning of a marvalous story. I am pleased to see a second author writing in the fashion of sci-fi authors of the 1950s and 60s. I look forward to the continuation of this story. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Please sir, may I have some more?

Thank you for the kind words. I hope to make this a very long series. Do over stories are my absolute favorite to read simply for the sake of reading. I think these types of stories are best sans the erotic component.

Looking forward to more!!!!

I love do overs. I am excited to continue reading this missive of yours. Thank you for your time and talents, Rubyroundup.

Oh god ami enjoying this story please keep these chapters coming they are Truely fantastic. I read a story on stories online.net before they got greedy and want everyone to pay a monthly subscription now to read on their website it was called A new past by Charlie foxtrot I think was his name it was a very long story but I’ve read it over a dozen times it’s that good so I’m hoping this will be a very long story and if you get enough people enjoying it do what tefler did with his story three square meals he started a Patreon but allowed people to pay whatever they liked from $1 to $50 a month whatever people could afford he ended up getting over £10,000 a month and is on chapter 168 now lol just a thought but you’ve to build up a fan base firstly.

good idea and well written story. Once again i don't understand some intentions in that story. When the two brutes /co-rapers have the same mindset to roughten up and rape other people, it will help no-one to let them see snakes + butterflys. So if he is already planting thoughts + illusions in their head, he should knit it to that bad intentions to lead them to better ways. Also there is an wide step from doing good to great things, but why must he be the saviour of the whole world? He could just be an better opposit part for the good against the bad. Also, being 18s young again, he should have some normal fun with a view willing girls. Doesen't do much good to only wait to marriage an women from his past while taking an other development in this new live. Of cause, he can still mariage that woman - if the relationship develops according to. But that is in an unknown future and the girls at the beach party were interestet in him now and surely also collecting more experiences then most young men can or do without an fixed relationship. I guess this story will go in an dual way with the watchers couple re-developing love, sex and exitement again by living in an beautyful world instead of only watching it - to teach the other watchers the fulfillment of existance. There had also been the mention that your little Superman wantet to make things better with his sister - but that seems to be forgotten. So maybe there are a view things that seems like some slip-ups or some things for further chapters, wich i eould highly enjoy to read. Thank you for publishing