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All Comments on 'No Paradise by the Dashboard Light Ch. 02'

by cincy4fun6

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MADDOGINTEXASMADDOGINTEXASover 1 year ago

You really gotta work on your grammar, is what I think!! Mistakes detract from being able to read the story...I feel like I am trying to translate Spanish!! (And I am bilingual!!)

The storyline is good, but needs some work also...kinda 'non-sequiter'-ish at points....but I ddo enjoy reading some of it!

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