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Click hereEventually, Cindy said through tears, "That was the most beautiful thing I've ever seen. I want that. I want to love, and be loved like that."
Poor tonal consistency and zero realism. This isn't howreal people would act in this situation. It doesn't make sense for virgin siblings to act so candidly about sex.
8" dick, you know SFA about the hymen and you're too lazy to finish the story, one star because there is no option for half a star.
Sorry...only a 4-star story...because of the ending.
You draw us in with the 'no parents for a week's line, and cut it off after a few hours max...
This is not a wasted effort, just not enough put into it to make a five star offering.
Redeeming value, for a reader like myself, and others who have commented-you spent a lot of time on the emotional charge between sister and brother; the mutual loss of their virginities to each other speaks VOLUMES as to their everyday relationship, and how their future will progress.
Cindy...is a keeper...she is also emotionally involved, for both her friends. She 'sacrificed' her desires to help them complete their love...and will apparently continue to do so, and be part of their mutual futures!!