All Comments on 'No Place Like Home Ch. 01'

great way to tell the story and end it the way you did. good job ty, I cant wait to see the next chapter . replacing mommy lol.

when she finds them in bed her horny will force her to join in.

Maybe the mother is cheating on the husband, I mean seriously spending that much time and energy on work is odd even for workaholics, not to mention how she treated him last time he tried to put the moves on her. So shes either crazy or in love with someone else.

Hey hun i loved your story it was amazing, suspenseful, descriptive, captivating......please write another chapter, its driving me nuts wondering how everything turned out... ;)....keeping a look out for that next one :)

Pretty good, but there needs to be more.

DOES IMATURE AND CHILDISH STRIKE A CHORD, SO HOW ABOUT MORONIC AND STUPID. They all remind me of you dear annony you pig fucking fag. I gave the story and you a 5!!!

great story, well written.