All Comments on 'No Regrets Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Beautiful

I have loved reading this story. It was nicely paced.

I would love to hear a bit of Ryan's side of the story, just a bit of how he came to be in England. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
every morning ...

Every morning i come to see if there is a new chapter. I knew it was ryan all the time and i love the story so far. But i'd love to hear too, what happened to Ryan. But i think you're about to tell us.

Well that said i just wanted to tell you, that your writing is great and the short chapters are okay with me. It's like a glimps into another world.

Lots of greetings from Germany!

Lysyana23

MADISONKAIMADISONKAIover 10 years ago
Brilliant! 5

This story flows so well and is not convoluted with unnecessary BS that sometimes writers seem to think they have to stuff in. You are an excellent writer. Glad you never got an editor. He or she would have probably fucked it up. LOL I too check early every morning to see if you have updated. I have been hooked since the first chapter. Please, I hope Tommy gets a happily ever after....he has suffered so much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I'm guessing...

I'm guessing that the second body in the fire was his wife's lover and that's why Ryan went back to England and goes by a different name. Regardless, poor thing is still freaking DYING even if he did miraculously find his love again. I can't....my heart hurts to think where this has to go now. Yes I think Thomas and Tommy could end up together, but damn. It's still gonna hurt a lot to get there. :(

canndcanndover 10 years ago

How many years passed? It's not that many is it? How and why did Ryan know where he was. How did Thomas happen to run into him? His son renamed for Tommy. How did he become this reclusive rich guy in so few years? Did Ryan recogize him the time he picked up his son? How sad the story is gonna end. Will Tommy fall for Thomas or for the parts of him that remind him of Ryan?

Can't wait for the end. The only small critique would be the uncanny events like Ryan coming back as he strangles to death and Tommy missing him in the back of the church and the inn but seeing him both times. Then he gets to the point where he's got the job and is living and bangs into Dylan=Thomas? But, the romance was so sweet that I can overlook it I think.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More

When will we get chapters 8 through 20. What a lovely story. Please stop what you are working on now and go back to Tommy and Ryan. Thanks for the good read!!

martin_x59martin_x59over 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks to all

Thanks to everyone that has commented. They are most welcome.

This story is by no means over and I am just uploading the next four chapters.

With regards to short chapters this is not uncommon. James Patterson often writes even shorter chapters in his novels.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I have the kleenex ready.

Hi,

Sorry for being too late on leaving a comment for this or previous chapter. I've been busy with school work and living life. So I decided to take the time out of my free time and leave you a comment.

I really loved this chapter.

First, you got me with the twist. Oh by the way, I'm the girl who left a comment I believe in chapter 2 and at the end of the comment I put -A. Therefore, I wrote that I had a theory. In my theory, after meeting Ryan and then going back to Thomas, I believed Ryan will later died in Tommy's flashback. So because he died, I thought he would be reincarnated into Thomas. And after reading this chapter, I did not expect Mr. Richardson to be Ryan. Great job on the turn of events. I love those.

Second, you could have written more emotion as to why Tommy is so fond of Thomas back when they first met. Furthermore, you could have went in depth on how this young boy reminds him of his lost love. Nevertheless, it was well.

And so the angst has begun, LOL. You left this chapter with great suspense. So I can't wait for the next chapter. Though, you are leaving me with such a broken heart. I have come to love Ryan and then him dying on the bed is just so hard.

To be honest, I don't know what to expect from this story. I haven't read a conflicting love triangles between family members. However, I did see movies but just not novels. Therefore, is Tommy going to end up with Ryan? Then what about Thomas? Is he going to end up with Tommy? Yet, how would that work knowing that Tommy fell in love the son of his first love? So then, I'm trying to picture myself in Tommy's position and I just can't see myself making love to Thomas knowing that this person is the creation of my first love. I just find it very uncomfortable. Furthermore, I think I would be reminded of Ryan every time I look at Thomas. Therefore, would I be able to live life with Thomas and differentiate the two? So in the end, if Tommy ends being with Thomas, I hope you write the psychology in Tommy. I want to read how he is able to handle it and move past it. But as a fan of your story, I just want Ryan and Tommy to be together. I have become so attached to Ryan.

I cant wait to read the next chapter. :)

-A

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Aaah! This story had me spellbound! Would love to know what happened next!

dairetodairetoover 10 years ago
tragic

I sobbed and sobbed.

if Ryan is dying how can there be a happy ending?

This story is shattering

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