by podga
Please hurry and post your next installment.
You'd think that after being together for so long they would have learned to communicate better. Scott needs to work up his courage and tell Thomas that he still loves him and does not want to break off their relationship. Maybe Thomas is waiting for that, too! Either way, Its an interesting story and the retrospective narrative is a clever device that makes the story more fascinating. I hope to read more of it very soon.
Your wonderful storytelling abilities. How is it possible that I dread when a chapter is coming to an end? That's how good you are. Do you come in a pocket version so I can take you around with me :o). Thank you for coming back!
Really like this story, only wish the chapter was longer! Love isn't all romance and happy endings. It can be a painful struggle that that never really has a neat resolution. Your characters are so flawed and realistic, it's really wonderful. Can't wait for the next one.
Glad to see you back with another fantastic story. I can't wait for the next installment.
It was so realistic! I could see Scott's reaction so perfectly. Can't wait for ch 3.
Good work very visual to the point I could see them in my mind as if I had previously seen it happen.