by Omegaman56
In a country with 30,000 fire arms deaths a year, I would argue you are not men, therefore you can't protect like the reader above, I feel you are a limp dicked Incel. Nlakjng women because they educated themselves enough to be independent you want chattel, not a partner maybe if you were as attached to women, like you are to guns, you would understand small boys who play with toys, don't get women, they get frivolous girls.
Overall, what a shit assed story, & the last I'll read from this author. NOTHING in this story's believable, even allowing for some leniency due to this being fiction. 2 stars. Bob
Sir, as one of those a woman on Lit you seem to think I need protection, you may be correct but that's what the Police and Armed forces are paid for. I'm not sure what adaptation you think the male has that means he can wield a knife or use a gone whereas women can't but hey I'm willing to learn. So no I don't have to give a male all the sex he wants for my protection my GF and I can take care of ourselves thanks. Stupid concept, silly story, a waste of my time.
And BTW you need to do a better job of proof reading.
Damn good story. Good fable with a good moral. Enjoyed it. To paraphrase, if a husband and wife aren't having sex, are they in a monogamous relationship? Damn good question.
He had a scope on his shotgun? If you need a scope on your shotgun you must be a terrible shot or you are shooting slugs. In that case, just shoot a rifle. Makes no sense. I see it on the internet but I've never seen anyone actually do that.
No one talks about caliber in relation to a shotgun
Cuck governor wouldn't ask for help? Got to be a blue state.
Interesting that ‘Medusa55’ suggests proof reading, especially considering her point about being able to us a ‘gone’ (gun). 🤪
No clue how this is rated as highly as it is. Numerous errors, terrible plot/development, and the depiction of sex is so bad I can see why Beverly iced up.
Strange to see a fantasy on here that's less about sex than it is about mistreatment.