by SirAuthor
Intriguing start. Again, you give us a decent human being, and this time one with feet of clay. Matt is a variation on a theme you've solidly established. I'm looking forward to the two following installments.
Good story love the humor and the bad fortune of his plight. Looking forward to next chapter.
The repartee was a little too much for me but definitely a good combination of humor and heartfelt emotions. 4*