All Comments on 'Nobody Knows Ch. 01'

i'd like to know what's next, though its kind of hard to imagine jayson holding his hand, putting his fingers in jayden's belt loops and then making the first move if he's so conflicted... but its still a good start

He doesn't seem very conflicted to me. Also, you should try to find yourself an editor. Lots of spelling errors and other things another set of eyes would catch.

Thank you for your opinions, i needed them, and do you maybe have an editor you can recomend?

Im lovin it so far cant wait for more

I am sure you had plenty of suggestions for editors! It is a good start I hope you continue the story.