All Comments on 'Nocturnal Love'

I hope that this is the beginning of many chapters to this wonderful story. Well told, well written,well paced, and with a twist I haven't read before.

Definitely need from this plot line.

I loved the story but the ending felt incomplete. I would have liked to have seen Janey and Rory finish fucking while Anna watched and fucked herself. Then Janey could have sat and watched Anna and Rory go at it and then all three could play together. Hopefully there will be a chapter two where storylines can be tied up.

It was a good story but seemed to just suddenly end without coming to a natural conclusion. Room for another chapter perhaps?

This is an easy erotic read by someone who knows the key words and phrases that excite. Well done

Most stories have a start, also a middle, and even an end, you forgot the end. Is this really the end ??. Or just a teaser. What you have is a good read, but PLEASE finish it. thanks

I love watching two people do a live fuck. The incest angle is even better.

Interesting storyline, go for it.