All Comments on 'Noises Through the Wall Pt. 01'

A very brilliant start.

Good start. Very hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

Definitely need to continue this storyline. Good writing. You have my attention.

Very well written and a great start but I wish writers would finish writing a story then publish it. Reading stories like this is like listening to radio serials from the 50's, it gets boring quickly

Please continue this excellent start

So many possibilities!!!

Please Continue!

Chapters 1 - 10 are complete, including the finale. Chapters will arrive on Literotica about a month apart.

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Pretty good start. I would maybe like to know more about her marriage and their sexual relationship. Had it grown stale or was it always vanilla? Maybe future chapters will give us insight into her son't thoughts as his mom escalated their contact. Is she hot or average mom? 5*

This is from a comic I just read the other day...

This is great! Love a mom son storyline while the mom is cheating on the dad. And this one is written very well.

Keep going!

More please.

A little different from your usual where the son is seducing the mom, and frequently taking charge. It's still good though. I like the change of pace. I'm sure before it's over he likely will take charge and mom not only gets to feel what Gwen feels, but also what Gwen tastes like. Good job as usual.

Jedd

Good story well written

"...I wish writers would finish writing a story then publish it."

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I do wish writers would write the entire story before starting to post, but that is to avoid the stories that just don't seem to end. Personally, I prefer the chapter a day (or so) approach rather than one huge posting.

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I don't think people realize how big is Literotica "page" is. I've tested copying and pasting the text into several programs (Word and Libreoffice) and it always works out to 9-10 pages. Anything 5 Literotica pages or more, I just skip -- and I usually rate it a 1.

excellent fantastic sensational awesome ..... obviously Gwen gonna catch her boyfriend actually fucking

his mother . what's gonna happen after . is she gonna immediately join them \ is she gonna leave

never return \ is she gonna take reasoning time away them than join \ is she gonna now get revenge

by seduce by fucking boyfriend's father \ is she gonna now get revenge by seduce by fucking boyfriend's mother

Already read the illustrated version you did and I love it all.

I so loved this, looking forward to new chapters 5 stars

Good first chapter excited to see where it goes.

More chapters quicker than usual please

Pity she has to be a cheating whore or this would be really hot. As is, the two of them are disrespecting her husband and his father while she clearly is eventually going to make a mockery of her marriage.

That was absolutely hot!!! Felt like I was right in the room with him.

Nice story. Very patient and well paced. Looking for Chapter 2 now.

Hot, just plain fucking hot

Very hot!! Great start.